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　　All of us agree that all University students have maind can They use to think and choose a way life. The governments need to be better in the future.

　　[评析] Maind应该是mind之误。第一句意思大致为：我们都同意，大学生都有自己的想法（用）来思考并选择生活方式。第二句大致为：政府需要在未来变得更好。本段最大问题其实还不是语言，而是这两句之间的关系莫名其妙。细辨之，又发现这里好像是作者在为全篇布局：因为第二段讲的是“政府应该有谋划，所以可以规定学生应该学什么”，第三段讲的是“学生应该按照兴趣自己选择”，最后是结论。因此，在这里，作者是有想法的，估计是想说：“我们都同意大学应该有自己的想法，但是政府为了变得更好，也需要给学生提出建议”，因此，这两句之间是转折关系。如果作者能明确指示出两句之间的转折关系，并对语言作适当修改，这一段就可以过关。

　　[修改] All of us agree that university students have the freedom to think and choose their way of life, yet in terms of what subjects they should study, the government should give them useful advice so that the country may become better in future.

　　The big question? How can we fuind the answer of realize interested students and the governments?

　　[评析]这里提出的问题其实是紧随第一段的，即：怎样才能找到一个答案，可同时满足学生和政府的利益呢？作者的表达能力实在有限，想到了，却说错了。

　　[修改] The question is: what is the best way to fulfill the target of both the students and the government?

　　First of all. Who the some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. There are experts. The experts could be give us the result suitable for the students and drew for Them the good choose. Also, should be the government put plan for future. For example, How many pailot, How many teacher or tuter the country need. Moreover, In schools, help students for choose that they like of job. Futhermore, coumet all the Minstortogether.(together much better)

　　[评析]这里作者想论证政府在学生专业选择中的作用。想表达几点：（1）专家来决定学生该学什么，因此专家可给学生提出建议；（2）政府需要规划未来，因此可帮助学生选择学习什么专业。（3）最好是把专家和政府结合起来。这里突然提出专家，那么专家和政府什么关系呢？应该突出这种关系，比如“experts from the government” 等。另外，这段的逻辑顺序似乎应该是：政府规划未来—需要不同专业的人才—请专家根据政府规划给学生提出建议。

　　[修改] First of all, the government should offer useful guidance to students about their choice of subjects. As we know, the government is always the one who makes plan for the country’s future. It decides, for example, how many pilots, teachers, engineers are needed in the next few decades. So, based on the government’s blueprint, the government expertsas well as the university should tell students what subjects will be most needed in future and the students studying them may have better chances ofemployment. This kind of advice will not only increase the students’ interest in the subjects, but also prepare the government for the future qualified workers.

　　On the other hand, I think not good idea a drew the way for students. Such as, take who finish study in school to study subject we like Not what he like. And the same as me. When I was students, me tuter told me “please study computer science”, and my do not like computer science. Now, I will study anothersubject. I have aim and I can do what I like. I agree with people. Who said only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future.

　　[评析]本段论述学生应该自己选择的好处。大致观点：（1）学习不喜欢的科目是痛苦的；（2）学生有自己的目标，为什么只能学未来有用的科目？原文表达凌乱，不成句。

　　[修改] On the other hand, I do not think it a good idea to force students to study the subjects they do not like. How painful it will be to read those books you have no interest in, or to attend those classes about which you do not care at all! Take myselfas an example. When I was choosing my subject, my professor told me to study computer science, but I don’t like computer science. So instead of taking that subject, I now study history. I have my own aim to realize, so why should I have to study subjects such as science and technology?

　　In conclusion, I would like to say that the students have maind. They with our recommend to them. They will be live one of the food lives in countries also the science and technology plays rule important in our life.

　　[评析]本段为结论。要点：学生有自己的思维，我们可以建议。虽然科技很重要，但学习自己感兴趣的科目，学生未来的生活得更好。原文思路凌乱，文字错误太多。

　　[修改] In conclusion, I would like to say that university students should be given the free mind to choose the subjects they like to study, though the government should offer useful advice to them. While science and technology is of course important, thestudents will contribute more to the future of the country if they are allowed to study the things they are really interested in.

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