PTE写作毕竟也是学术类写作，所以按照一个特定的结构去写才会分数比较高。而且在文章的内部衔接方面也要适当地用一些连接词，毕竟通过内容连接这种高段位做法不是每个同学都能掌握的。做好这些，那在结构方面的问题也就不会太大。

错误一 一个句子中有多个动词

错例：Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;

这个句子中出现了两个动词, receive和can become.注意一个句子中应该有且只有一个谓语动词。

改正：应该添加一个从句结构。

Students who receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;

Students can become competitive in the labour market if they receive skills training.

错误二There be 句型中谓语没有随其后名词改变

错例：There is a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.

这里There be结构中的主语是countries,所以谓语动词要用are.

改正：There are a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.

错误三主谓不一致

有时在SWT中大家要会写一些比较复杂的句式，例如插入成分或同谓语成分。在写作的过程当中，每每遇到以上几种情况的时候，回眸重新找到句子的主语是最重要的。

例如：Thomas Edison, one of the most distinguished scientists, is a brilliant inventor.这里在写完第二个逗号的时候，就应该回过头来看看主语Thomas Edison是单数的第三人称，而不能被插入成分中的scientists所蒙蔽。所以这里的谓语要用is而不是are.

错例：Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, lead to severe diabetes.

这就话中主语为cardiopathy,谓语应该为单三形式。

改正：Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, leads to severe diabetes.

错误四不及物动词和系动词写了被动语态

happen, appear, disappear, rise, emerge, occur, take place这些词都没有被动语态

错例：The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year;

改正：The accident was similar to the one that happened last year.

错误五 丢失冠词

错例：A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

改正：A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

错误六 词性混淆

错例：A large number of people hold the believe that students' social activities should be the first priority.

改正：A large number of people hold the belief that students' social activities should be the first priority.

这个例子中believe是动词，belief才是名词形式。虽然发音相近，但是用法却完全不同。

练习——找出这段的四处语法错误

Armed police, who has been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educated students, are expect to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and imparted knowledge to them about shoplifting, offensive behavior, graffiti, drugs and alcohol in schools in Sydney, while parents are afraid of dangers that were happened in communities last year.

首先找到这句话的主干部分Armed police are expected to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and impart knowledge to them about...

错误一：Armed police, who has been brought into NSW schools...

Armed police为可数名词，因为是集合名词本身表示复数，单复数同行，所以不用加s.这句话应该改为Armed police,who have been brought into NSW schools...

错误二:who has been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educated students

这里应该是一个并列结构，所以educate应该与reduce是一致的，所以应该改成to reduce crime rates and educate students (to reduce crime and to educate student).

错误三：Armed police are expect to build positive relationships...

这个部分的主语是Armed police, 所以谓语动词应该为被动，表示被期待。所以应该改为 Armed police are expected to build positive relationships...

错误四：不及物动词和系动词没有被动语态：happen, appear, disappear, rise, emerge, occur, take place这些词都没有被动语态,所以while parents are afraid of dangers that were happened in communities last year. 应改成while parents are afraid of dangers that happened in communities last year.

正确版答案

Armed police, who have been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educate students, are expected to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and impart knowledge to them about shoplifting, offensive behavior, graffiti, drugs and alcohol in schools in Sydney, while parents are afraid of dangers that happened in communities last year.

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