2017-08-02
错误一 一个句子中有多个动词
错例:Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;
这个句子中出现了两个动词, receive 和 can become. 注意一个句子中应该有且只有一个谓语动词。
改正:应该添加一个从句结构。
Students who receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;
Students can become competitive in the labour market if they receive skills training.
错误二 There be 句型中谓语没有随其后名词改变
错例:There is a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.
这里There be 结构中的主语是countries, 所以谓语动词要用are.
改正:There are a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.
错误三 主谓不一致
有时在SWT中大家要会写一些比较复杂的句式,例如插入成分或同谓语成分。在写作的过程当中,每每遇到以上几种情况的时候,回眸重新找到句子的主语是最重要的。
例如:Thomas Edison, one of the most distinguished scientists, is a brilliant inventor.这里在写完第二个逗号的时候,就应该回过头来看看主语Thomas Edison是单数的第三人称,而不能被插入成分中的scientists所蒙蔽。所以这里的谓语要用is 而不是are.
错例:Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, lead to severe diabetes.
这就话中主语为cardiopathy, 谓语应该为单三形式。
改正:Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, leads to severe diabetes.
错误四 不及物动词和系动词写了被动语态
happen, appear, disappear, rise, emerge, occur, take place 这些词都没有被动语态
错例:The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year;
改正:The accident was similar to the one that happened last year.
错误五 丢失冠词
错例:A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.
改正:A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.
错误六 词性混淆
错例:A large number of people hold the believe that students' social activities should be the first priority.
改正:A large number of people hold the belief that students' social activities should be the first priority.
这个例子中believe是动词,belief才是名词形式。虽然发音相近,但是用法却完全不同。